Reviews For New beginnings
Name: laurawillows (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2011 07:19 PM · For: New Beginnings
I forgot that we wrote this, and what it was about. you done good! Get back into writing, and keep your chin up kiddo. Have fun in college.
Name: LauraandBillinlove (Signed) · Date: Oct 28, 2008 07:15 AM · For: New Beginnings
loved the story! Laura's acts are ro typical for her- to try to protect the others even if this hurts them.... good work!
Name: Polyxena (Signed) · Date: Oct 24, 2008 08:16 PM · For: New Beginnings
Just read all of the chapters and I like this. The only thing that bugs me are the babies. I hope you are going to address it more. Seems that Bill got off the hook way too quickly about that. I see that maybe since the cancer came back she doesn't want to dwell but losing babies and not having the father/man you love there is disgusting. Hope this doesn't offend. I just like this story and its just friendly feedback.
Name: Belladonna (Signed) · Date: Aug 04, 2008 05:29 PM · For: New Beginnings
You have to update soon~ I cant take the suspense again!!
Name: Angstyfluff (Signed) · Date: Aug 04, 2008 05:18 PM · For: New Beginnings
Oh! This is so saaaaaad!
But beautifully written. :)
Name: Belladonna (Signed) · Date: Aug 03, 2008 12:21 PM · For: New Beginnings
I cant believe this but I can at the same time. I hope Bill gores after her AGAIN!!! He has to realize its a defense mechanism~ But people are stupid, I hope you update soon!! I'm really enjoying the story!
Name: romanticandproudofit (Signed) · Date: Aug 01, 2008 02:17 PM · For: New Beginnings
I love it and I am totally hooked. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh I am so sad for those little Adama babies. Bet they would have been cute. It's heartbreaking. XX
Name: Belladonna (Signed) · Date: Aug 01, 2008 03:07 AM · For: New Beginnings
Well i hope that you update soon!! man what a cliff hanger loved the chapter
Name: voodooDRUG (Signed) · Date: Jul 24, 2008 09:11 AM · For: New Beginnings
Ok i didn't really no how else to umm... contact you but I just went through my story and I realised what you meant. When you said that the story wasn't there i thought you meant what I wrote seemed pretty random and out of place. But... lol... what you meant was that it REALLY wasn't there. I will fix it now, sorry :S.
BTW i have read your story and I reali love it!
Name: kywildcat (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2008 09:24 AM · For: New Beginnings
That was so sad...I can't believe no babies...I'm crushed....*sniffles*...please keep going Bill needs to get his head out of his you know what ;)
Name: BSG1524 (Signed) · Date: Apr 29, 2008 08:51 PM · For: New Beginnings
I love this story. I loved the longer chapter too! Hope the next chapter is soon!!!
Name: lullaby moon (Signed) · Date: Apr 26, 2008 02:37 PM · For: New Beginnings
I'm curious as to how this is going to finish. You're writing is definitely imporving and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Name: marg_h (Signed) · Date: Apr 26, 2008 02:26 AM · For: New Beginnings
if it's helps you to write and update faster i would say again that this is a very cute and loving story, and that i love Laura pregnant.
keep it coming! :]
Name: DansUneAutreVie (Signed) · Date: Apr 23, 2008 07:40 PM · For: New Beginnings
So now Bill knows - I can't wait to see what he and Laura do next!
Name: marg_h (Signed) · Date: Apr 23, 2008 03:54 PM · For: New Beginnings
don't fix anything, keep writing, i like this one, he is more free and funny they usuly people do [not always]. just somthing to read to make you smile.
keep it coming! :)
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