32%Reviews For New beginnings
Name: laurawillows (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2011 07:19 PM · For: New Beginnings
Dear me,
I forgot that we wrote this, and what it was about. you done good! Get back into writing, and keep your chin up kiddo. Have fun in college.
Much love,
Me
Name: LauraandBillinlove (Signed) · Date: Oct 28, 2008 07:15 AM · For: New Beginnings
loved the story! Laura's acts are ro typical for her- to try to protect the others even if this hurts them.... good work!
Name: Polyxena (Signed) · Date: Oct 24, 2008 08:16 PM · For: New Beginnings
Just read all of the chapters and I like this. The only thing that bugs me are the babies. I hope you are going to address it more. Seems that Bill got off the hook way too quickly about that. I see that maybe since the cancer came back she doesn't want to dwell but losing babies and not having the father/man you love there is disgusting. Hope this doesn't offend. I just like this story and its just friendly feedback.
Name: Belladonna (Signed) · Date: Aug 04, 2008 05:29 PM · For: New Beginnings
You have to update soon~ I cant take the suspense again!!
Name: Angstyfluff (Signed) · Date: Aug 04, 2008 05:18 PM · For: New Beginnings
Oh! This is so saaaaaad!
But beautifully written. :)
Name: Belladonna (Signed) · Date: Aug 03, 2008 12:21 PM · For: New Beginnings
I cant believe this but I can at the same time. I hope Bill gores after her AGAIN!!! He has to realize its a defense mechanism~ But people are stupid, I hope you update soon!! I'm really enjoying the story!
Name: romanticandproudofit (Signed) · Date: Aug 01, 2008 02:17 PM · For: New Beginnings
I love it and I am totally hooked. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh I am so sad for those little Adama babies. Bet they would have been cute. It's heartbreaking. XX
Name: Belladonna (Signed) · Date: Aug 01, 2008 03:07 AM · For: New Beginnings
Well i hope that you update soon!! man what a cliff hanger loved the chapter
Name: voodooDRUG (Signed) · Date: Jul 24, 2008 09:11 AM · For: New Beginnings
Ok i didn't really no how else to umm... contact you but I just went through my story and I realised what you meant. When you said that the story wasn't there i thought you meant what I wrote seemed pretty random and out of place. But... lol... what you meant was that it REALLY wasn't there. I will fix it now, sorry :S.
BTW i have read your story and I reali love it!
Name: kywildcat (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2008 09:24 AM · For: New Beginnings
That was so sad...I can't believe no babies...I'm crushed....*sniffles*...please keep going Bill needs to get his head out of his you know what ;)
Name: BSG1524 (Signed) · Date: Apr 29, 2008 08:51 PM · For: New Beginnings
I love this story. I loved the longer chapter too! Hope the next chapter is soon!!!
Name: lullaby moon (Signed) · Date: Apr 26, 2008 02:37 PM · For: New Beginnings
I'm curious as to how this is going to finish. You're writing is definitely imporving and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Name: marg_h (Signed) · Date: Apr 26, 2008 02:26 AM · For: New Beginnings
if it's helps you to write and update faster i would say again that this is a very cute and loving story, and that i love Laura pregnant.
keep it coming! :]
Name: DansUneAutreVie (Signed) · Date: Apr 23, 2008 07:40 PM · For: New Beginnings
So now Bill knows - I can't wait to see what he and Laura do next!
Name: marg_h (Signed) · Date: Apr 23, 2008 03:54 PM · For: New Beginnings
don't fix anything, keep writing, i like this one, he is more free and funny they usuly people do [not always]. just somthing to read to make you smile.
keep it coming! :)
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