34%Reviews For What if.... You failed, my Sine Qua Non....
Name: laurawillows (Signed) · Date: Oct 17, 2008 10:16 PM · For: One and only.......
I loved it. I can't even express in my thoughts how much that made sense, and how if Laura hadn't said 'I love you' to Bill on the hanger deck, how Broken they both would have become.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you liked it:) I soo hope this is one crazy fantasy and it will never be close to reality,.... yeah- optimism... and I was sooo tempted to make all of this Laura's dream after which she says "I love you", but I resisted the temptation:) thanks for reviewing:)
Name: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: Oct 16, 2008 06:35 PM · For: One and only.......
OMG! I think i'm going to cry! so sad and probably a lot closer to what's going to happen than we'd all like. really beautiful. Thank you.
Author's Response: oh, dear, don't cry! I had to repeat myself "it is just an idea" while I was writing it though... thank you for commenting:)
Name: Polyxena (Signed) · Date: Oct 16, 2008 01:42 PM · For: One and only.......
Jesus this ripped my heart out. As I began to read it I wasn't thrilled how this didn't go by what we saw in the episodes but as I kept reading it grew on me.
I like how you changed what happened and how we all assume Laura dies but she doesn't. I really loved how you made her misinterpret Elosha. Also love how you ket Bill a hero.
The only thing that through me off was this "Place Galactica between the cylon fleet and the convey!” Bill gave his last order." - I think you meant convoy instead. But that's just me.
Great job.
Author's Response: Oh, the whole idea was to go from something familiar and to change it to 180 degrees- from devastated Erth with Bill alive to Heaven-like Earth with Bill dead.... and everything because of love....I'm glad you liked it.... I was not really sure about that..... and yes, I meant convoy, but just my fast typing gives me troubles.... thanks for reviewing!
Name: LauralTree8 (Signed) · Date: Oct 15, 2008 11:53 PM · For: One and only.......
*is sad*
Author's Response: hugs :) Don't be sad- I'm working on my humorous fic right now- you will soon be happy again :)
Name: flirtylaura (Signed) · Date: Oct 15, 2008 10:36 PM · For: One and only.......
Hey there lady. I think this is a very interesting “what if”. Wow, is it sad! Reading this reminds me how grateful I am that TPTB allowed Bill and Laura to love each other.
Author's Response: ah, I'm really happy that TPTB didn't go with that idea- i would be dead from sorrow.... I'm actually a bit depressed by my own fic right now.... hehe thanks for reviewing!