Reviews For Twenty-Six Hundred
Name: Steeldust_01 (Signed) · Date: Jan 26, 2008 01:54 AM · For: φεβράρης (Febraris)
Wow ... this chapter is intense !
I really like it.
Name: Princess Arinayed (Signed) · Date: Apr 12, 2006 02:50 PM · For: φεβράρης (Febraris)
First: Awesome plot
Second: I love how you use the five human senses.
Third: I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you Princess Arinayed - I wish I had a response as witty but I'm afraid I'm getting a little sleepy!
Name: Mona (Anonymous) · Date: Apr 12, 2006 05:37 AM · For: φεβράρης (Febraris)
Beautifully written. I hope there'll be more.
Author's Response: Thank you Mona for taking the time to review :D I promise there will be more! I was actually just about to sit down and do so! lol *sits down and does so*
Name: mariel (Anonymous) · Date: Apr 11, 2006 10:29 PM · For: φεβράρης (Febraris)
Oh, excellent! You have a great knack for description and the slowly growing A/R is beautifully drawn. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you mariel for the review! I honestly didn't expect this story to get any attentipn :D I promise there's more A/R to come
Name: loopner (Signed) · Date: Apr 11, 2006 10:12 PM · For: φεβράρης (Febraris)
Nice. I love the angst. I really liked this poetic sentence: "as her hair fell around her face in the fire-light, it had grown since he had last seen her - deepened its colour to contrast against the bland landscape". I was a little confused about the word "occupation". I first thought it was the occupation of the cylons on the planet (like using the word in war) and not the RTF occupying the planet. I can really feel the gray of the planet as you describe it and the warm colors inside her tent. Thank you!
Author's Response: oh I never thought about 'occupation' that way - can't think why! Sorry about any confusion - *laughs at self* i can't believe that one slipped through!
Name: PearlWing (Signed) · Date: Apr 11, 2006 08:13 PM · For: φεβράρης (Febraris)
Ooooh...I love this one very much. I can't wait for the next chapter. Very nicely written and very believable! *grins foolishly* I must have more...and soon!
Author's Response: *Pearlwing is god* i just kind of write around you! :D Thank you for reviewing!